No real humor.
Honestly I don't see how the humor here is dark. I've seen darker. In fact there's no real humor at all besides the fact he becomes crazy for not finding his milk.
However, I was pleasantly surprised of the animation fluidity. For that, and just that, it saves itself from a too low score... but next time, if I can give you a good advice: try to plan a good joke before making your animation.
you obviously have no sense of humour.
Okay
As you asked for, here are the found typos:
Miror B. => Mirror B. (I guess?)
"I'm going to use my intelligence" => "I'm going to use my knowledge" would fit better
Weegee => NOT A TYPO BUT OH GOD IT WAS UNEXPECTED. XD
Also, why the hell did you put "What I'm Made Of" from Sonic Heroes in the end? I don't want to sound harsh but... Just unfitting.
Overall, graphically it was basic, could be a lot better but it doesn't really need to. After all it's a parody. On the sound, it's okay, maybe quality flaws and a music a bit too loud, but I won't complain.
Neat job, you get a 3.
It´s "Miror"...yeah,I know it sounds strange,but that´s his true name.
"I will use my knowledge" Ok,I think it´s better too.
the "metal overlord ending" ...well,now that you mentioned...I´m going to change too.
thanks for the review!it was very useful!
Not bad!
It was pretty sarcastic, and quite fun to watch. I liked it, the animation was smooth, and I really liked the voices. Voting this 3. It's not bad, I like it.
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